Wednesday, August 29, 2012

WELCOME BACK!!

Greetings, new Sophomores!!

It's been so great getting to know you over the past few days :)  You guys seems like such a fun, smart group of students and I'm glad to get the year rolling.

Just as a reminder, everything that needs to get signed is due FRIDAY, so don't forget!  Get everything signed ASAP!!  If you forgot anything, your documents are posted here on the blog.

UPCOMING DUE DATES:
Friday August 31 - Parent signatures on letter & tech form
Wednesday September 5 - Letter to Miss Cordes

And just a friendly reminder....


Make this a year to remember!!



Monday, April 9, 2012

Social Justice - The Mission of Slam Poetry

Good morning, students!

Last week, we began our SOCIAL JUSTICE discussion.  We watched a video about TOMS shoe company and discussed the definition of social justice.  On Friday, we played the Line Game and realized that we have a whole lot of things in common.  Many of you in your reflections talked about how you were surprised that you even had the bad things in life in common - having electicity or water shut off, family in jail, and even being suspended from school. 

In order for us to really understand social justice, we have to have empathy - the ability to understand and feel the pain and plight of another person.  We must be able to feel for each other if we want to make a difference.

One important way that we develop empathy is by listening to each other's stories and sharing our own.  Through the power of creativity, we can write poetry that others can hear and can help us heal.  That is what this unit is all about.  Don't be afraid to write boldly.  Write about what matters to you so that your classmates can develop empathy and that we can all unite under a common mission of social justice.



Monday, April 2, 2012

JC Honor Revisions - Take 2

Good morning, Sophomores!

I hope you all had a restful and relaxing break - it's time to get down to business and get this 4th quarter off to a good start! 

Last week, you all were working on revising and uploading your final drafts of your Julius Caesar essays on Google docs.  Unfortunately, I didn't recieve quality work from everyone.  In fact, I'm afraid, that from most of you, I got the bare minimmum effort.  You know that is not acceptable.  My expectations for you are high - especially now that you're only one quarter away from being Juniors.  Let's step it up...

Here are the slides from today's revision discussion and what you are expected to complete by tomorrow night.  That's it folks.  Step up to the plate.

Tuesday, March 20, 2012

Julius Caesar - Honor Essay Revision

Hello students!

It's time to REVISE your in class essays!  Here are the steps you need to take in order to complete your FINAL DRAFT (Due on Friday March 23rd):

  1. Review your score from your first essay.  What do you need to work on?  Start by revising those things first.  Here is a revision checklist for your use.
  2. Type up your revised paper in Microsoft Word.  If you can, have a friend or another teacher take a look at it before you finalize the paper.
  3. When you are completely done, UPLOAD your document to GoogleDocs.  This is really easy!  Just follow these directions:
    1. Go to Google.com
    2. Click SIGN IN.
    3. Your school sign in is:  ID#@students.d94.org (example: 33333@students.d94.org)
    4. Your password is:  Network password used for computers with 94 at the end (example: 20156494)
    5. Click on DOCUMENTS.
    6. Click UPLOAD (the square button next to CREATE).
    7. Click SHARE (blue button in upper right corner) the document with ACORDES@D94.ORG
      1. Under VISIBILITY, select ANYONE WITH LINK
      2. Under ACCESS:  Select CAN COMMENT
    8. This must be done BEFORE the end of the day on Friday March 23rd.
  4. YOU'RE DONE!  You can check back to see the comments that I have written about your paper throughout spring break. 

Sunday, March 18, 2012

The Counterargument/Refute

Izzy posted on our Facebook page about the counterargument/refute part of the paper.  I thought I'd share my answer with everyone here on our homepage:

Counterargument = a sentence acknowldeging the other side
Refute = several sentences that come BACK and prove that your side is still stronger. 


EXAMPLE: [counterargument] Some may say that Brutus is dishonorable because he killed his best friend. [refute] Yet, this wasn't just a random murder out of jealousy or rage. This was a planned assassination that was necessary. Caesar's power would have been uncontrollable, so Brutus's decision was made to protect all of Rome


Any questions?? Please email, comment here, or post on Facebook and I'll be there to help out!!


Best, 
Miss C.

Brutus - Is He HONORABLE??

Over the weekend, you guys are preparing to start writing your FINAL ESSAY on Julius Caesar.  Here are the photos from the board and some reminders to help you be as prepared as possible tomorrow:

  • YOUR THESIS:  
    • You must DEFINE honor.  What is it?
    • You must DECIDE one way or the other - is Brutus honorable or not?
If you need ideas or need help brainstorming, post comments here or on Facebook!  Let's keep brainstorming together!!

See you tomorrow,
Miss Cordes


Monday, March 12, 2012

Best of the Best Examples!

Hey Guys!!
Here are the presentations we talked about in class that are great examples of incorporating textual evidence and analyzing the evidence! You can use these when you are writing your essays as examples of how to format your ideas. :)





HAVE A GREAT WEEK!!!!!
~Miss D. and Miss Cordes

Thursday, February 16, 2012

JC - In Animation!

Hi everyone!

I just wanted to let you know about a cool tool out there on the web for you guys to use.  The BBC (British Broadcasting Company) created an animated version of Julius Caesar that you can watch on your own to help you catch up with the story.  Here it is...I've also placed it on the MEDIA section of our webiste for your future reference.

Enjoy!

Tuesday, January 31, 2012

"Julius Caesar, Sexy Beast"

Well, if he wasn't busy sleeping with his friends wives, he was always up for some genocide!  Welcome to the wonderful, complex world of Julius Caesar, everyone!  Today we started watching Ancients Behaving Badly: Julius Caesar.  If you were gone, you can catch up on YouTube.  For the rest of you, I hope you learned something new!  Important to note:

  • Caesar was AMBITIOUS
  • Caesar's family experienced a FALL FROM GRACE.
  • Caesar made the choice to CLIMB THE SOCIAL LADDER, rather than be bitter and agry about his faimily's misfortune
  • Caesar acted so that he could gain POWER and SOCIAL STATUS in his relationships, conquests, and politics.
Those are the major points that we drew from the film today.  Keep a vigilant eye out for more tomorrow.  Have a great Tuesday!  White Collar is on at 9pm on USA ;)!!

Don't forget your Letter to Miss Dinges is due TOMORROW!!

Paz,
Cordes

Monday, January 30, 2012

Hey Guys!!!!

Hey Guys! You all had such great questions in class today! I am so happy that I got to meet all of you. It is going to be an awesome semester!! I can't wait to get to work with all of you and spend this semester getting to know you! If you ever have any questions or need any help this semester, don't be afraid to let me know!

~Miss D.

Saturday, January 28, 2012

Too cute...

I don't want you guys to be too jealous, but you should see how sweet my babies are :).

Wednesday, January 11, 2012

Finals are almost here!

Greetings friends!!

I have a few resources to post here for you in case you need them for the final.  Remember our chats - PLAN NOW!  Final exams make a huge difference in your grades and can really help push you up a letter grade and prevent you from failing or getting a low grade.  Start planning now, get organized, get plenty of rest, eat well, and you'll do very well. 


The English Exam:  Tips and Techniques

Tuesday - Preparation
  • You will recieve the writing prompt and a blank 4-square outline.
  • Read the prompt carefully.  Highlight the QUESTION.  Your answer to the question will become your THESIS.
  • Begin brainstorming with a "T-Chart".  What are the possible ideas for each side?  The more ideas the better!
  • Choose your side.  Which side can you write the best arguments for?
  • Outline your paper.
    • Write your three topic sentences
    • Choose three different types of evidence
    • Consider how you will analyze each piece of evidence
    • Link back to your thesis
    • Plan your counterargument
    • Plan your introduction
  • Pack up your backpack with the prompt and outline - don't forget to bring these to school!  Ah!
  • Get a good night's rest, drink plenty of water, and set your alarm for the next day!
Wednesday/Thursday - The Final
  • Bring your most comfortable writing utensil.  You will be writing for 60 minutes, so make sure you're comfy! 
  • Bring your favorite loose leaf paper -- no ripped pages from a journal.
  • Smile and relax!  Pace yourself as you write, and, since you are so well prepared, you will do a fantastic job :)
GOOD LUCK EVERYONE ON YOUR FINALS!

Example T-Charts:


 The outline:  Parts of the paragraph

Tuesday, January 3, 2012

Happy New Year, everyone!  Welcome back!

I hope you all had a restful and relaxing break.  It's time to jump back into the swing of things on the English front.  We are rounding out our unit on The Phantom of the Opera and having our very own masquerade!  All of the documents that you'll need can be found here on the website.  Get excited!!